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弟弟
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Joined: 06 Mar 2007
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Location: 承德
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 07:08:46    Post subject: 3首 Reply with quote

●一小块云挡住了我的去路

正午 一小块云恰巧出现在正南
不同的人在不同的角度
忽视了这一事实 影子们
越来越多 也越来越厚
厚到棺椁的尺寸

呼吸被阻止在路口处
天空的蓝不堪负重 垂下手臂

这是春天 她的脸色不怎么好看
现在说爱说恨都是多余的
对面走过来的女人前胸和后背
一定写着宁静二字

渐渐的暖 吹乱带些苦味的头发
被漫山的杏花 桃花 苦菜花围困
我还小 还年轻 还能选择恰当的方式
抑制一时的冲动
2007-4-24

●雨之四月

桃花 乌鸦 阴雨逼迫四月
玩一把刀 吃一副药
把一首歌唱完
尽量准确

现在起 让汉字痛一下
把骨头藏进包里
咬牙 跺脚 草叶也快乐快乐
那些牛呀羊呀猪马狗什么的
掩饰一下 把握分寸
等风把门自然打开

草根有已经完全绿了
一个后来者 没有目的
举起酒杯 誓言是无法阻止的
一闪一闪的全是理性的光芒

正午 雨停了
太阳就照在我的身上

2007-4-25

●行 走

我行走 从早晨回到夜晚
习惯低头 把喧闹尽量扯得远些
那些眼睛试图抹杀我的清白
身边的日子 一只破表
不紧不慢的倦怠
一张欠表情的脸

地下的水被人欺骗上来
用于蒸发 用于干涸
欺骗鱼 欺骗野鸭 欺骗影子
风吹脚步 一声是一声

从谷雨起 就不再感觉轻松
一生的重量究竟有多重呢
我脱呀脱 总也脱不掉一粒征尘

我行走 从夜晚回到早晨
2007-4-25
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杨光
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 08:07:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢结尾的诗意.
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 08:39:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

“呼吸被阻止在路口处”,干吗还加个“处”:)
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金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 20:31:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

弟弟先生的诗歌很耐读,我比较喜欢`
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