郭思远
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kokho
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拜读 问好
 
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晓松
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| Posted: 2007-04-29 15:10:40 Post subject: Re: 赠表弟晓勋北下归九江 |
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| 郭思远 wrote: |
赠表弟晓勋北下归九江
凤舞南飞落九天，
行人车马卢沟前。
遥途寻觅来时路，
满载忧心念故园。 |
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诗不错，方位有点疑问。“北下归九江”应是从南向北至九江，而诗中又“凤舞南飞”，且“卢沟（桥）”也在九江北面，故搞不清究竟是向北还是向南？ |
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郭思远
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| Posted: 2007-04-29 23:41:06 Post subject: Re: 赠表弟晓勋北下归九江 |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
| 郭思远 wrote: |
赠表弟晓勋北下归九江
凤舞南飞落九天，
行人车马卢沟前。
遥途寻觅来时路，
满载忧心念故园。 |
问好朋友！
诗不错，方位有点疑问。“北下归九江”应是从南向北至九江，而诗中又“凤舞南飞”，且“卢沟（桥）”也在九江北面，故搞不清究竟是向北还是向南？ |
谢晓松，应该是南下归九江
由北往南 由北京到九江
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王君明
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拜读问好！
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