笑聊 探花
 
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				 Posted: 2015-06-19 01:19:08    Post subject: 俳律-琴棋书画 | 
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				梁溪散人学写俳律
 
琴
 
绕梁三日侵
 
高山流水肝胆心
 
奏出时代音
 
 
棋
 
中原逐鹿思
 
两军争锋好胜师
 
连环用计时
 
 
书
 
知识给养余
 
恰似婴儿吮奶徐
 
点点滴滴储
 
 
画
 
人生一幅画
 
世事无常如八卦
 
酝酿好与坏 | 
			 
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		qinghongh 榜眼
 
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				 Posted: 2015-06-19 07:30:26    Post subject:  | 
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				| 笑聊兄来得很快啊。 | 
			 
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		笑聊 探花
 
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				 Posted: 2015-06-19 13:13:05    Post subject:  | 
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				| 感觉写的没有庆宏兄那么细腻,传神,有待开发。 | 
			 
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		我为诗歌狂 童生
  
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				 Posted: 2015-06-28 04:55:59    Post subject:  | 
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				| 初入门,学习 | 
			 
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		笑聊 探花
 
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				 Posted: 2015-06-28 23:09:10    Post subject:  | 
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对于俳律诗,我也在摸索,共同提高吧。 | 
			 
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