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星子(MALAYSIA)
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PostPosted: 2015-03-30 17:48:55    Post subject: 鍋 Reply with quote




他們
張嘴成鍋
放縱油膩膩的微笑
借煤氣的咽喉豪語
借無著火的煤氣暄寒問暖
借煤氣的高低溫調整謊言的沸度

炸著一身世故
蒸著四周危境困身的冷汗
炒著冷話題
添糖 賄賂每一條深長的咽喉
加鹽 設下旱的陷阱 再賜水
蓋鍋成密室中的會議
轟隆如雷中
唾液也乾旱
開蓋中煙起煙滅

會議後
煤氣瀉氣成化了膿的聲音
無聲的輕煙
無法回應
探詢的煙囪
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PostPosted: 2015-03-30 19:16:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

蓋鍋成密室中的會議
轟隆如雷中
唾液也乾旱
開蓋中煙起煙滅

——艺术的描摹!!
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星子(MALAYSIA)
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PostPosted: 2015-05-09 15:59:16    Post subject: 鍋 Reply with quote

谢谢! 问好!
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PostPosted: 2015-05-23 16:38:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象生动

張嘴成鍋
放縱油膩膩的微笑

欢迎问好
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PostPosted: 2015-05-24 16:07:17    Post subject: 鍋 Reply with quote

谢谢! 问好!
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PostPosted: 2015-06-02 04:35:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

張嘴成鍋
放縱油膩膩的微笑
借煤氣的高低溫調整謊言的沸度
炸著一身世故
開蓋中煙起煙滅

佳句不断!
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星子(MALAYSIA)
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PostPosted: 2015-06-15 16:49:32    Post subject: 鍋 Reply with quote

谢谢! 问好!
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