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莲的记忆

白水
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Posted: 2015-05-21 15:26:18 Post subject: 莲的记忆

莲的记忆（一）那一池莲在我笔下摇曳浅浅的清波漂洗墨染的夜色谁在窗棂如水洒万里银辉，清清白白的绽开千万朵莲。那是借了你的一束火花又有谁知，你是谁？

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2015-05-21 22:42:44 Post subject:

不用担心，人人会知的。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2015-05-22 06:51:40 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

不用担心，人人会知的。

知道就好

白水
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Posted: 2015-05-22 06:53:48 Post subject:

（二）我在夜, 焦虑地寻找一烛光焰你说:" Don't worry, just follow my path." 我趋步眺望茫茫星海西天那端坐于莲的，究竟是伟岸的男子还是纤纤女儿身？凡尘肉眼，识只识肉体凡胎歌舞升平的酒足饭饱，恰是今日的混混沌沌。

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Posted: 2015-05-22 12:23:04 Post subject:

谁说是手生了，诗句美丽依旧。

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Posted: 2015-05-22 17:36:45 Post subject:

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:

谁说是手生了，诗句美丽依旧。

谢谢才女鼓励。最近玩儿多了，心不静，很少敲键盘。那日你们说到写作，才想起该整理一下诗稿了 Embarassed

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Posted: 2015-05-23 16:32:48 Post subject:

阳刚之火照彻大地，阴柔之水滋生万物问好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2015-05-24 16:48:23 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

阳刚之火照彻大地，阴柔之水滋生万物

问好

谢谢，问好。不见你发表新作，又忙着爬山了 Confused

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Posted: 2015-05-24 16:52:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

阳刚之火照彻大地，阴柔之水滋生万物

问好

谢谢，问好。不见你发表新作，又忙着爬山了 Confused

爬的不是山，是高度

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Posted: 2015-05-24 17:43:38 Post subject:

哥喝的不是酒，是寂寞。问候岛兄、白水！嘿嘿，岛兄也不那边照个面，让小弟们苦撑着~

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Posted: 2015-05-24 20:28:48 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

哥喝的不是酒，是寂寞。问候岛兄、白水！
...

晓松兄辛苦了，多喝一杯，真酒

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Posted: 2015-05-27 17:04:42 Post subject:

有講究，有意思。那麽加法就是喝高了 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2015-05-30 23:21:22 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

阳刚之火照彻大地，阴柔之水滋生万物

问好

谢谢，问好。不见你发表新作，又忙着爬山了 Confused

爬的不是山，是高度
...

呵呵，诗人出口成诗，欣赏高度。
_________________
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Posted: 2015-06-05 17:23:01 Post subject:

谢谢各位朋友来访，最近忙着和李时珍玩游戏，迟复见谅。

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Posted: 2015-06-08 19:53:37 Post subject:

（三）漫步池塘却找不到三寸金莲，那些记忆中渐渐模糊的脚印还有长长的裹脚布也一并淡去暮春时节，飘花飞絮惟有你撑一柄绿盈盈的小伞遮阳，遮雨，遮一抹含苞的红颜在我的笔尖莞尔一笑 _________________

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Posted: 2015-06-08 20:12:49 Post subject:

已经很轻灵了但还没有突破，石破惊天的那种 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2015-06-10 18:56:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

已经很轻灵了

但还没有突破，石破惊天的那种

谢谢商榷，问好

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Posted: 2015-06-12 05:52:12 Post subject:

暮春时节，飘花飞絮惟有你撑一柄绿盈盈的小伞遮阳，遮雨，遮一抹含苞的红颜在我的笔尖莞尔一笑 ————干净，美丽，写出了江南小巷的味道，和回首的喜悦。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2015-06-13 17:13:44 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

暮春时节，飘花飞絮
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谢谢老师的鼓励

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