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七绝老妻夜织围巾

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-01-05 08:55:43 Post subject: 七绝老妻夜织围巾

七绝老妻夜织围巾多伦多近日气温下降，老伴赶夜为爷孙织围巾御寒，因成一绝。飞针走线织围巾夜色沉沉伴苦辛寒气袭人浑不怕爷孙颈暖恰如春 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2015-01-05 16:27:58 Post subject:

天伦之乐，伉俪情深

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-01-06 07:39:51 Post subject:

谢庆宏关注，也请求注意防寒。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2015-01-06 08:46:16 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

谢庆宏关注，也请求注意防寒。

谢谢黄老师！您也多保重！

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Posted: 2015-01-07 02:28:27 Post subject:

暖暖爱心。。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2015-01-07 06:29:43 Post subject:

谢寒水兄赏阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2015-01-07 19:07:40 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝老妻夜织围巾
多伦多近日气温下降，老伴赶夜为爷孙织围巾御寒，因成一绝。
飞针走线织围巾
夜色沉沉伴苦辛
寒气袭人浑不怕
爷孙颈暖恰如春

此情此景，两个字：温馨。黄老师这首诗不由得让我想起母亲给我织毛衣的情景，感慨系之，试仿效孟郊的《游子吟》而作：

慈母竹针线，
为我织绒衣。
漂泊十余载，
迟迟无计归。
虽怀寸草心，
未得报春晖。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-01-08 05:48:25 Post subject:

晓松虽言仿作，然字里行间无不流露出至孝感恩之情。电邮收到否？向你报告你去年送我的君子兰今年又盛开了。再次感谢！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2015-03-26 14:50:24 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七绝老妻夜织围巾
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老夫老妻好，手携手地笑。
相伴相扶助，相依相照料。
宽容互谦让，苦累不计较。
落得真情在，恩爱永不老。
_________________
古体白话诗，自古传至今。
首首跟时代，句句贴人心。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-03-26 16:29:52 Post subject:

谢谢范老师赐诗鼓励，即颂春安！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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