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我们在岛上 (外一首)

冷水
童生

Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 53

冷水Collection

Posted: 2007-04-27 00:52:02 Post subject: 我们在岛上 (外一首)

我们在岛上整个海，就要离开大团团的云飘去，留下低沉的涛声，紧贴着海滩一阵比一阵低天正蓝，但落船而来的渔人身躯黝黑拎着几兜小鱼海水，一滴滴漏下一路漏下举着空空的海螺，我暂时停止呼吸某年我正好朝向门临窗坐下，笔直的靠近这世界最后一堵墙一幅油画青草比远方高一些开始刻意地逆时针转动咖啡在最里面翻腾去向一圈又一圈沉下去深深地安静，坐到某年阳光才绕一圈，照进来跟着进来的人，一个都认不清隔着巨大透明的玻璃我的衣衫黑了想起身，已无法离开这时，空空的杯，摇一摇瓷的光泽边一种冰凉轻微溢出这时，起风了临街的人漫不经心地带着整个人类低头回家 _________________ 越来越蠢

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-04-27 05:06:11 Post subject:

空空的杯荡漾着涟漪...........

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2007-04-27 05:09:56 Post subject:

喜欢第2首 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2007-04-27 05:11:41 Post subject:

很好的诗！问好诗人。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

冷水
童生

Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 53

冷水Collection

Posted: 2007-04-28 00:05:46 Post subject:

谢谢白水,杯中冲浪,杨海军, 握手 _________________ 越来越蠢

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2007-04-28 16:24:15 Post subject:

举着空空的海螺，我暂时停止呼吸青草比远方高一些漫不经心地带着整个人类低头回家这些都是好句子。有灵感！ _________________ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

金金
进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
金金Collection

Posted: 2007-04-29 20:58:00 Post subject:

这两首很不错：）推荐 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

阿依琼裙
秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
阿依琼裙Collection

Posted: 2007-04-29 21:39:01 Post subject:

我暂停呼吸,停顿在你的诗中. 打包带走了~~~~) _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

杨光
秀才

Joined: 01 Jun 2006
Posts: 683

杨光Collection

Posted: 2007-04-29 21:43:16 Post subject:

这时，起风了临街的人漫不经心地带着整个人类低头回家 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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