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[原创]优美的死(外二)
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 20:40:53    Post subject: [原创]优美的死(外二) Reply with quote

优美的死


当然,双臂是展开的,惯性足以使他
入水时,水花也正好从女人的耳朵里溅出
院子再无他人,也就是说
二十四年前的一个夜晚
被雨水冲垮了多少次的土墙坯,再一次倒下
也无人关心

这个大晴天,一切都可以显露无疑了




本命年


这从来不缺少红的天
突然,傻眼了

春风,越吹越暖
吹红了腰上的带子
母亲叮咛我时,已老了许多

谁的心里没有一个牵挂
桃花大朵大朵的开
大朵大朵的,却没有一朵象样




日记



春暖花开,轮回生命
黑夜,只是一点,与他处无关

昨天,在山上
与朋友畅谈
庙堂之高

明日,在山下
为朋友作别
江湖之远



2007年4月30日
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 20:43:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

还不错,少用连词“)
问好啦`!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 22:08:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃花大朵大朵的开
大朵大朵的,却没有一朵象样


喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 23:55:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

老朋友 终于又看到你了,工作开展的顺利吧?

又来个大跃进 为你高兴 ;))

Cool Laughing

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