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《生活像一片叶子落了下来》
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PostPosted: 2015-03-02 01:48:39    Post subject: 《生活像一片叶子落了下来》 Reply with quote

生活像一片叶子落了下来

落在春天的小雨里

落在荒芜的田地里

落在炊烟升起的农家乐

落在江南古镇的婉约风



我像这样徘徊已经不止一次

去顾及每一个站在窗前的人

他们的眼睛。远方一座座无辜的

楼层,是生活因生存而显得恰到好处。

我不再悠悠荡荡地走

我跑起来,我骑车

经过清晨的包子铺

杀牛的铺子门口,瞅一瞅挂着的

牛头。这逝去的生命继而带来生意兴隆

杀戮,为了生存



每每这样拂过一缕风

我都会浑身抖擞,奔驰而过。

屠夫会冲我笑

包括早起的狗和一夜没睡的猫

老太太冲着河里倒马桶

娃娃对着门楼撒泼尿

校长开着宝马最后一个到

五点多我们开始做早操



等阳光出来

繁华依旧

昨晚的笙箫依旧

狗和猫的那些破事依旧

校操场的农家鸡下蛋被偷依旧

女生宿舍阳台上内裤不知去向依旧

男人对着漂亮女人的屁股目不转睛依旧

作业,稿件,设计图,老板的谩骂

头疼,可乐,该死的圆形药片依旧

时间被锁在笼子里转来转去,依旧



安余城/文

2015.3.2
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游戏诗歌
秀才


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PostPosted: 2015-03-02 02:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的诗很纯真,欣赏
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Location: 吉林省和龙市华林路64-12-1号
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PostPosted: 2015-03-02 02:42:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的诗还有提升空间
但总体欣赏
很有生活的气息
显示自己的独特思考
但某些个别语句还要斟酌
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