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春节三首
歐陽里山
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PostPosted: 2015-02-22 05:41:49    Post subject: 春节三首 Reply with quote

春节三首



<<那是>>

燃你相片的早上
那是个
灰鸽茫然的早上

蔷薇花被雨抹湿
窗彻夜开着
樟树站牌你不再等我
围墙上一只伞尖走过去

三年了
河水浅了
我最多记得七年



<<误以为暖冬>>

看着
沙发后你亲手漆制的
木船模型

多年前这样的冬天
你把庆贺的中国结
围在那条街没有情人的
雪人腰上

开心果素壳
拼出一幅很有意味的
年画



<<玫瑰>>

那年教室
你送我一袋新鲜玫瑰
幽香,忧伤

雨在玻璃上
放肆
像夏天跳出围栏的
美洲鹿

我的双手失掉了那种美
握过的那些美
也已不在










这三首不是简单的诗歌,这里有让我不忍直面的东西,以及,我。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2015-02-27 15:18:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较直,生活质感。怎样更“幻美”?可以探索。
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PostPosted: 2015-02-27 15:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较直,生活质感。怎样更“幻美”?可以探索。
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