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新诗 – 错误
魏鵬展
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PostPosted: 2014-12-30 20:51:54    Post subject: 新诗 – 错误 Reply with quote

错误 魏鹏展

空调滴水的时间容量
在同一个路口
倾斜的影子远远地
守着
偶尔的移动间
落在一双错误的鞋上
肉丸是不能吃的美味
蘑菇给沉默加了一个
新话题
在同一个路口
倾斜的影子远远地
望着
在同一条路上
消失了大小影子的交接

2014年8月27日 中午
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PostPosted: 2014-12-31 16:09:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

在同一个路口
倾斜的影子远远地
望着
在同一条路上
消失了大小影子的交接

学习、拜读.
祝新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-31 16:56:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

何军雄 wrote:
在同一个路口
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謝謝﹗
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