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香樟树下看现代月亮

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-10-28 03:17:04 Post subject: 香樟树下看现代月亮

香樟树下看现代月亮周道模这棵香樟树，听过我高中的读书声这棵香樟树，现在守护着我的影子雨后的月亮啊，慢慢爬上了东山现代月亮啊，靠近地球来找灵魂月亮你比我的心还亮啊尽管你的酥胸也有瘢痕月亮你比我的梦还圆啊尽管你也曾弓背瘦身月亮你比我的初恋还痛啊尽管彩云擦去了你的泪水月亮你比我的孤独还美啊尽管几颗星星隐隐在陪你哦，月亮你飘进了云朵的客栈我只好搂回我芬芳的影子去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影 2014-8-11下午5：33连山 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

山城子
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Posted: 2014-11-01 05:40:40 Post subject:

月亮你比我的心还亮啊尽管你的酥胸也有瘢痕月亮你比我的梦还圆啊尽管你也曾弓背瘦身月亮你比我的初恋还痛啊尽管彩云擦去了你的泪水月亮你比我的孤独还美啊尽管几颗星星隐隐在陪你 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

风动
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Posted: 2014-11-01 11:01:59 Post subject:

浪漫主义情怀. 提读

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-11-03 18:34:32 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

月亮你比我的心还亮啊
...

谢谢山城子老师的读引！暮秋的问候！
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chenrunmin
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Posted: 2014-11-05 22:47:25 Post subject:

哦，月亮你飘进了云朵的客栈我只好搂回我芬芳的影子去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-11-07 17:02:30 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

浪漫主义情怀. 提读

现在一般都不写这种风格的诗了。

写的是无味的散文似的唠叨诗。
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chenrunmin
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Posted: 2014-11-15 18:50:01 Post subject:

现在一般都不写这种风格的诗了。但还是要表达人的情感。马年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-12-03 03:25:51 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

哦，月亮
...

谢谢陈君的读引和鼓励！初冬快乐！
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唐刚
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Posted: 2014-12-05 06:48:26 Post subject:

欣赏，问好！ _________________ 诗，是人类精神最后一片净土。诗，是人类灵魂最后的栖息地。认为：只有诗才能够拯救灵魂。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-12-08 02:27:50 Post subject:

唐刚 wrote:

欣赏，问好！

谢谢唐刚读赏和问候！阳光般地问候！
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唐刚
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Posted: 2014-12-08 19:47:29 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

唐刚 wrote:

欣赏，问好！

谢谢唐刚读赏和问候！阳光般地问候！

你飘进了云朵的客栈
我只好搂回我芬芳的影子
去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影
——欣赏佳作，问好道模！
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诗，是人类精神最后一片净土。
诗，是人类灵魂最后的栖息地。
认为：只有诗才能够拯救灵魂。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-12-18 03:13:29 Post subject:

唐刚 wrote:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

唐刚 wrote:

欣赏，问好！

谢谢唐刚读赏和问候！阳光般地问候！

你飘进了云朵的客栈
...

由杨辉隆兄寄的《三峡诗刊》，了解到唐兄的诗艺和名度。

问候！
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