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香樟树下看现代月亮
William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2014-10-28 03:17:04    Post subject: 香樟树下看现代月亮 Reply with quote

香樟树下看现代月亮

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这棵香樟树,听过我高中的读书声
这棵香樟树,现在守护着我的影子
雨后的月亮啊,慢慢爬上了东山
现代月亮啊,靠近地球来找灵魂
月亮你比我的心还亮啊
尽管你的酥胸也有瘢痕
月亮你比我的梦还圆啊
尽管你也曾弓背瘦身
月亮你比我的初恋还痛啊
尽管彩云擦去了你的泪水
月亮你比我的孤独还美啊
尽管几颗星星隐隐在陪你
哦,月亮
你飘进了云朵的客栈
我只好搂回我芬芳的影子
去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影


2014-8-11下午5:33连山
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2014-11-01 05:40:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

月亮你比我的心还亮啊
尽管你的酥胸也有瘢痕
月亮你比我的梦还圆啊
尽管你也曾弓背瘦身
月亮你比我的初恋还痛啊
尽管彩云擦去了你的泪水
月亮你比我的孤独还美啊
尽管几颗星星隐隐在陪你
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PostPosted: 2014-11-01 11:01:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪漫主义情怀. 提读
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PostPosted: 2014-11-03 18:34:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
月亮你比我的心还亮啊
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谢谢山城子老师的读引!暮秋的问候!
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PostPosted: 2014-11-05 22:47:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

哦,月亮
你飘进了云朵的客栈
我只好搂回我芬芳的影子
去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影

有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2014-11-07 17:02:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

风动 wrote:
浪漫主义情怀. 提读


现在一般都不写这种风格的诗了。

写的是无味的散文似的唠叨诗。
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PostPosted: 2014-11-15 18:50:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

现在一般都不写这种风格的诗了。但还是要表达人的情感。马年快乐幸福,吉祥如意! 学习,顶上 问好朋友.
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PostPosted: 2014-12-03 03:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
哦,月亮
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谢谢陈君的读引和鼓励!初冬快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-05 06:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-08 02:27:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

唐刚 wrote:
欣赏,问好!


谢谢唐刚读赏和问候!阳光般地问候!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-08 19:47:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
唐刚 wrote:
欣赏,问好!


谢谢唐刚读赏和问候!阳光般地问候!
你飘进了云朵的客栈
我只好搂回我芬芳的影子
去梦中去泪水中捞你的幻影
——欣赏佳作,问好道模!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-18 03:13:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

唐刚 wrote:
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
唐刚 wrote:
欣赏,问好!


谢谢唐刚读赏和问候!阳光般地问候!
你飘进了云朵的客栈
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由杨辉隆兄寄的《三峡诗刊》,了解到唐兄的诗艺和名度。

问候!
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