qinghongh
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 Posted: 2014-10-07 13:17:33 Post subject: 蝶恋花 和萧浩文同学（代巍拔友转贴） |
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蝶恋花 和萧浩文同学
巍拔 甲午秋八月 于枫城多伦多
北地秋凉霜染树,
雾霭烟凝,
云过如飘絮,
万里新词心意付,
知音还教锺期妒.
共渡寒窗甘与苦,
逝者随风,
梦里常回顾,
欸乃山河陶令慕,
草庐窗烛迎君处.
附萧原词
藤紫依依攀碧树，花中猫凝，蝶舞迎花絮。谁把丹青随意付？惹来春鸟声声妒。
细观同窗心思苦，笔下生风，处处提人顾。金石之交人尽慕，更寻好梦无行处。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2014-10-07 16:19:01 Post subject: |
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寒窗甘苦，知交唱和，令人钦慕。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2014-10-18 16:58:40 Post subject: |
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北地秋凉霜染树,
雾霭烟凝,
云过如飘絮,
万里新词心意付,
知音还教锺期妒.
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情深意厚，掷地有声！  |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2014-10-20 05:38:18 Post subject: |
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Hi，建议你把它改过的诗歌贴过来  |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-10-20 07:33:10 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| Hi，建议你把它改过的诗歌贴过来 |
好，巍拔新改如下：
和友人 调寄《蝶恋花》
巍拔 甲午秋八月 多伦多
北地秋凉霜染树，
霧靄煙凝
云过如飘絮
万里新词心意付
知音应令鍾俞妒
共渡少年甘与苦
逝者随风
梦里常回顾
欸乃山河陶令慕
草庐窗烛迎君处 |
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