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那晚，离地球最近的月亮

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2014-09-05 22:21:35 Post subject: 那晚，离地球最近的月亮

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Posted: 2014-09-09 21:03:38 Post subject:

问好周老师！——来学习！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2014-09-09 22:40:45 Post subject:

谢谢山城子老师光临！改了几句。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2014-09-16 03:27:11 Post subject:

马年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2014-09-22 21:45:11 Post subject:

要是长点得多好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2014-09-26 18:36:02 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

马年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！学习，顶上问好朋友.

谢谢祝福！有时不如意，也要忍受生活。
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Posted: 2014-09-29 03:30:02 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

要是长点得多好

写长诗？怕读者没有耐心。
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Posted: 2014-10-02 03:28:01 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2014-10-02 16:05:55 Post subject:

周老师国庆节快乐！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2014-10-10 03:58:08 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

有意境,有感觉,感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好.

谢谢读赏和问候！拙诗最近发表在美国《新大陆》144期上。
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Posted: 2014-10-10 03:59:14 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

周老师国庆节快乐！！

山城子老师节日快乐！秋天红火！
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