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痛风

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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Posted: 2014-08-10 04:04:44 Post subject: 痛风

痛风周道模苦难的记忆下坠沉重的思想下坠坠入骨肉坠入故乡小路坠入血脉坠入黄河长江坠入我的中年潜伏坠到我的脚胫疼痛我沉痛的脚板踩着旋转的地球我沉痛的情思踩出余生的步履在一步一痛中前行我感觉到地球疼痛的神经我感受到地球痛苦的运行那几千年的天灾人祸征伐杀戮那汶川大地震叠埋的累累尸体马来西亚飞机失联成了世界的隐痛战火又在伊拉克燃烧古老文明这地球的疼痛传递到我的生命这地球的神经联通了我的神经痛风是叫我忍受人间的苦难啊我的痛苦只是世界的亿分之一痛风停息就有欢跳和奔跑的喜悦地球啊，你的痛苦是否也有减轻 2014-7-13下午14：57连山夏晴时 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2014-08-10 16:28:40 Post subject:

我感觉到地球疼痛的神经我感受到地球痛苦的运行 ——问好周老师！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection

Posted: 2014-08-11 04:12:04 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

我感觉到地球疼痛的神经
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谢谢山城子老师的读引和问候！秋凉的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection

Posted: 2014-08-11 04:26:32 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

我感觉到地球疼痛的神经
...

谢谢山城子老师的读引和问候！秋凉的问候！
_________________
诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2014-08-11 17:48:55 Post subject:

我感觉到地球疼痛的神经我感受到地球痛苦的运行 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

chenrunmin
进士出身

Joined: 21 Nov 2009
Posts: 2427
Location: nanjing.jiangsu.china.
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Posted: 2014-08-11 23:23:01 Post subject:

马年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection

Posted: 2014-08-14 15:19:54 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

我感觉到地球疼痛的神经
我感受到地球痛苦的运行

谢谢冲浪兄的读引！秋凉的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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水弦
秀才

Joined: 26 Mar 2013
Posts: 293
Location: 中国辽宁灯塔
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Posted: 2014-08-15 16:30:08 Post subject:

立意高远痛风！ _________________ 诗意生存

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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Posted: 2014-08-22 03:37:53 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

马年快乐幸福，吉祥如意！学习，顶上问好朋友.

谢谢陈君的问候！秋爽的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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