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[原创]浣溪沙.公园拾趣

梦飞翁
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Posted: 2007-05-03 06:31:05 Post subject: [原创]浣溪沙.公园拾趣

浣溪沙.公园拾趣梦飞翁2007.4 无赖小儿踩滑鞋，三摇两步把跤跌，又呼奶奶又呼爷。老汉抱孙揉泡慢，婆婆埋怨不停歇：你出主意可真邪！（新韵） _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-05-03 07:28:32 Post subject:

哈。生动有趣。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-03 20:45:09 Post subject:

婆婆埋怨不停歇：你出主意可真邪！口语入诗，妙极，欣赏！

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Posted: 2007-05-04 02:52:59 Post subject:

多谢暗香、晓松二友清赏！望多多教我！ _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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