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老虎

郭永平
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Joined: 16 Apr 2014
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Posted: 2014-06-11 16:16:19 Post subject: 老虎

老虎躺着动物园静听落叶飘下的声音寂寞一天天抽着身体的血只有外形没有内容的活着坚硬的骨头长满郁闷爸爸那就是老虎比我们的小狗狗还乖一只活着的标本无法在大地上取得荣光的老虎带血的爪子抛开水泥块添着泥土润肺在枯萎的草原上露出老虎的瘦骨也不在动物园被人看着剥了皮的孤岛虎爪储满了草原的根和温暖的土地它不属于几个平方它属于深山属于草原一个色彩斑烂的老虎它死了死在草原上它尝到阳光的味道和雪的骨骸它依旧占据草原永远的封面 [/b]

chenrunmin
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Joined: 21 Nov 2009
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Location: nanjing.jiangsu.china.
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Posted: 2014-06-12 03:57:36 Post subject:

它死了死在草原上它尝到阳光的味道和雪的骨骸它依旧占据草原永远的封面祝马年快乐幸福。首复，问好。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

郭永平
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Joined: 16 Apr 2014
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Location: 甘肃
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Posted: 2014-06-12 04:39:15 Post subject:

谢谢，老师的点评

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