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《爸爸，我想帮你找回童年的脸》
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PostPosted: 2014-05-31 20:28:36    Post subject: 《爸爸，我想帮你找回童年的脸》 Reply with quote
《爸爸，我想帮你找回童年的脸》


爸爸，今天是六一儿童节
你听到后 从严肃的脸里抽出一大叠钱
一年 送我一张笑脸

哦 爸爸
你这张笑脸好生动
可以说 就是我笑逐颜开的春天
我好想说
爸爸 我不要那些印满老人像的钱
我要的是你今天的这张脸
一年永远

爸爸 你说过
你的童年就是一张大花脸
就是一条小泥鳅
就是一只快乐滚动的小铁环
如今 我的童年就是一本教科书
和你的严肃 妈妈的严防死守
我除了读书 还是读书
读花了星星的眼

爸爸，今天是六一儿童节
我不想上公园 也不想逛商店
我想你和我一起游戏
帮你找回童年的脸
让我 也有你的童年 你的笑脸

爸爸 今天我有决定权
我是小头军长 你是大头士兵
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PostPosted: 2014-05-31 20:59:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
胡有琪 wrote:
《爸爸，我想帮你找回童年的脸》
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这是张放大长成天真又活泼童心的脸，还有童年常常看到父亲那严肃慈爱的脸谱，不讲童年是本教科书历史开了个玩笑，它往自己脸上写下淡淡岁月的忧伤？
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