影沉寒水
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五律•春雨拾忆（新韵）
流年听雨后，斜草惯诗钟。
昨夜轻雷滚，今朝红杏拥。
几番思叫卖，通巷隐香风。
此际堪珍重，人间一放翁。
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2014-04-20 03:36:57 Post subject: |
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春雨之忆，画面清新，如临其境，如闻其声。
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Daxia
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| Posted: 2014-04-23 07:27:46 Post subject: |
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欣赏。
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影沉寒水
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| Posted: 2014-04-24 02:09:14 Post subject: |
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问好朋友们
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-04-24 13:11:26 Post subject: |
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昨夜轻雷滚，今朝红杏拥。
有声有色 |
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冰清
同进士出身
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| Posted: 2014-04-26 15:40:13 Post subject: |
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炼词炼意都不错。
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