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红红的草莓甜甜的话

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Posted: 2014-04-06 15:00:37 Post subject: 红红的草莓甜甜的话

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Posted: 2014-04-09 02:47:26 Post subject:

我是泥土和雨水生育的婷婷的朝霞我是时代和劳动创造的甜甜的希望有滋有味的诗，祝马年快乐幸福。首复，问好。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2014-04-09 04:10:45 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

我是泥土和雨水生育的婷婷的朝霞
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由于题材特殊，有意写成老百姓都读得懂、有点美的诗歌。

谢谢读赏和鼓励！春天好！
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Posted: 2014-04-09 15:49:04 Post subject:

细腻地生活 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2014-04-10 02:36:17 Post subject:

诗歌甜美。

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Posted: 2014-04-13 19:01:30 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

细腻地生活

水波的弦弹起细腻的生活。谢谢鼓励！春天好！
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Posted: 2014-04-13 22:28:29 Post subject:

诗歌：用拟人手法描述是对生活……

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Posted: 2014-04-14 01:49:05 Post subject:

很有味道的诗歌生活的文字学习

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Posted: 2014-04-15 00:29:20 Post subject:

gnis wrote:

诗歌甜美。

都是摘草莓吃草莓惹出的相思。谢谢读评！春天好！
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Posted: 2014-04-23 14:26:26 Post subject:

北左河 wrote:

很有味道的诗歌生活的文字学习

谢谢北左河的读赏和鼓励！春天的问候！
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Posted: 2014-04-29 21:59:13 Post subject:

诗风大变啊,很棒~~! _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2014-05-01 08:56:51 Post subject:

將不同花樹賦予不同的女性稱謂，將草莓想成思春的姑娘，頗有意思哦。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2014-05-01 22:06:43 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

诗风大变啊,很棒~~!

根据题材变语言风格，正在尝试。春天好！
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Posted: 2014-05-05 19:13:00 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

將不同花樹賦予不同的女性稱謂，
將草莓想成思春的姑娘，頗有意思哦。

谢谢博弈君的读评和鼓励！夏天好！
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