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《超越苦难》
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PostPosted: 2007-04-19 21:09:12    Post subject: 《超越苦难》 Reply with quote
《超越苦难》
翻开历史
一段段文字暴露
骨骸 支撑起的苦难
安躺在发黄的尸体表面

小和尚念着佛语
啃完这具尸体后腹痛难当
在远山的背后排出
搁在胃里的
颂一辈子圣经都无法消化
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PostPosted: 2007-04-19 21:49:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
这个写的不如前面写的，缺少文字的美感。问好！ Smile
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 05:10:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
同感！！删了重新写过！！
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 11:19:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
加油 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 17:26:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
题目吸引我进来，内容有待改良。不只是文字的美感，思想上应有卓然之处，才配得上这好题目。建议N年后再写。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-20 17:32:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
nobody wrote:
题目吸引我进来，内容有待改良。不只是文字的美感，思想上应有卓然之处，才配得上这好题目。建议N年后再写。

有道理！！
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