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七绝－春日闻曲

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-19 19:23:01 Post subject: 七绝－春日闻曲

雨润芳华似醉妍，晨风梳柳嫩芽鲜。兴来雅趣倾新律，何处哀飞角羽弦？

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Posted: 2007-04-19 19:57:40 Post subject:

“何处哀飞角羽弦”，果然不同凡响！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-19 21:40:29 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

“何处哀飞角羽弦”，果然不同凡响！

呵呵，谢谢关注！

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Posted: 2007-04-20 07:46:06 Post subject: 致莹雪

雨润芳华,晨风梳柳,雅听哀弦,实在比画面更为清新美丽.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-20 15:23:07 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

雨润芳华,晨风梳柳,雅听哀弦,实在比画面更为清新美丽.

呵呵，先写的诗。而后配的图。谢谢点评！ thanks

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Posted: 2007-04-20 21:37:16 Post subject:

恩，文字的想象空间有着视觉不能给予的美。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-21 17:29:52 Post subject:

谢谢关注！

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Posted: 2007-04-21 21:41:06 Post subject:

晨风梳柳嫩芽鲜好句！

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Posted: 2007-04-22 06:24:39 Post subject:

我也来关注一下，最后一个“哀”字有点让我吐血，不过没什么，呵呵。

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Posted: 2007-04-22 16:31:14 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

晨风梳柳嫩芽鲜

好句！

谢谢秋叶兄！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-22 16:37:14 Post subject:

fade wrote:

我也来关注一下，最后一个“哀”字有点让我吐血，不过没什么，呵呵。

谢谢fade关注！

哦，没什么就好，我还纳闷呢！这就是一首诗啊！怎么跟武侠小说里，打人似的，还能吐血？ want to smile

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