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也读黄老师《静思齋咏物》

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-15 09:09:34 Post subject: 也读黄老师《静思齋咏物》

也读黄老师《静思齋咏物》（一）晨起伴长吟，琼林入我襟。驹驰情得得，鸟近语歆歆。流水三春趣，南云千古心。巴山开宿雾，相向一瑶琴。（二）无弦琴似美玲珑，步步烟霞步步风。万象拎诗来笔底，千程有咏汩胸中。纯真未必青襟子，活脱何妨白发翁。长说寒云随日落，我看和叶秀无穷。（三）无碍无为韵事通，澹然方寸意无穷。村情幸有刀州梦，蔗境何辞象外翁。贞竹静涵幽鸟语，锦鳞跃起见心红。别看物物生生事，尽在玄元橐籥功。（四）笔路兢兢休问，岁华冉冉相期。琳琅醉墨润心池。物我花开并蒂。望月凭栏情系，听泉驻马神驰。青云振羽自忘机。最美悠溶天地。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-02-15 10:08:37 Post subject:

诚谢冰清赠诗评阅，在下在整理拙作过程中，冰清虽然身体欠佳，眼力不济，仍得到她悉心的指教，在此敬和第四首《西江月》，以表谢忱。碧海青天互望，春蘭秋桂相期。劳君润色乐心池，喜见东篱并蒂。流水潺潺神往，高山郁郁心驰。静观万物尽生机，画稿诗存胜地。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-02-15 10:31:17 Post subject:

唱和俱佳祝两位老师月元宵佳节快乐，新春好诗多多

qinghongh
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Posted: 2014-02-15 11:50:10 Post subject:

欣赏并学习。

晓松
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Posted: 2014-02-15 12:44:04 Post subject:

冰清老师好诗，黄老兄好和，非常乐见二位老师的唱和之作。哈哈，我就喜欢凑热闹，明知不行，也要掺合一下。我也和二位老师的《西江月》，以表敬意。湛湛长空青碧，元宵蟾桂如期。挥毫泼墨正相宜，更见熟瓜坠蒂。网上诗心不老，屏前“画马”奔驰。冰清玉润展生机，只待春回大地。

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Posted: 2014-02-16 01:52:00 Post subject:

杰作，都为杰作，学习了javascript:emoticon('')

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:01:21 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

诚谢冰清赠诗评阅，在下在整理拙作过程中，冰清虽然身体欠佳，眼力不济，仍得到她悉心的指教，在此敬和第四首《西江月》，以表谢忱。

碧海青天互望，春蘭秋桂相期。劳君润色乐心池，喜见东篱并蒂。
流水潺潺神往，高山郁郁心驰。静观万物尽生机，画稿诗存胜地。
...

黄兄过誉。您妙手传情意，诗书画一家，赞赏之外，我得好好地学！

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:03:48 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

唱和俱佳
祝两位老师月元宵佳节快乐，新春好诗多多

水，深谢你一如既往的鼓励！
家庭团圆节快乐！

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:09:19 Post subject:

qinghongh、晓松、秋叶君节日快乐！谢谢鼓励！

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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:13:07 Post subject:

学习，问好冰清、黄老师，庆宏，晓松，秋叶和白水，久违，周末快乐 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:40:04 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

冰清老师好诗，黄老兄好和，非常乐见二位老师的唱和之作。哈哈，我就喜欢凑热闹，明知不行，也要掺合一下。我也和二位老师的《西江月》，以表敬意。

湛湛长空青碧，元宵蟾桂如期。挥毫泼墨正相宜，更见熟瓜坠蒂。
网上诗心不老，屏前“画马”奔驰。冰清玉润展生机，只待春回大地。
...

晓松好和！谢谢。
依前韵随和一首凑凑兴。
——这也可算是我读你《青玉案 ● 天涯路》《新移民写照》的一点点感受！

闯荡江湖何易？艰难岁月谁知？几分造诣几分痴。天睠人缘并蒂。
止息诚然无定，经营得道神驰。条条干路见生机。别是一番天地。

恳请指正！

冰清
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Posted: 2014-02-16 03:44:01 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

学习，问好冰清、黄老师，庆宏，晓松，秋叶和白水，久违，周末快乐

谢谢岛斑。
周末快乐！家庭团圆节快乐！

晓松
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Posted: 2014-02-16 11:28:48 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

晓松好和！谢谢。
依前韵随和一首凑凑兴。
——这也可算是我读你《青玉案 ● 天涯路》《新移民写照》的一点点感受！

闯荡江湖何易？艰难岁月谁知？几分造诣几分痴。天睠人缘并蒂。
止息诚然无定，经营得道神驰。条条干路见生机。别是一番天地。
...

冰清老师的赠诗，有赞许，有肯定，有祈愿，更有理解，让人心动，令人感动。衷心地谢谢！

晓松
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Posted: 2014-02-16 11:39:58 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

学习，问好冰清、黄老师，庆宏，晓松，秋叶和白水，久违，周末快乐

岛兄，周末好！的确久违了。几次弟兄们都谈起，啥时候再一起喝酒呢？

朱思丞
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Posted: 2014-02-16 16:25:17 Post subject:

俱为佳作，学习问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/2538322492

qinghongh
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Posted: 2014-02-16 20:44:32 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

学习，问好冰清、黄老师，庆宏，晓松，秋叶和白水，久违，周末快乐

岛主长周末快乐！

笑聊
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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:56:27 Post subject:

高手佳和之作，读来情景交融感人！问好老师！

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