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七绝钓岛风云（二）

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Posted: 2014-04-13 05:04:00 Post subject: 七绝钓岛风云（二）

七绝钓岛风云（二）钓鱼岛上无鱼钓，东海风云起浪涛。甲午当年成国耻，内忧外患几时消？ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 旧作：五绝钓岛风云钓岛浪涛高，长天涌怒潮。百年屈辱史，甲午恨难消。～～～～～～～～～～～～五绝黄岩岛/钓鱼岛波涛几岛礁，争吵调门高。君看英阿战，挥军万里遥。

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Posted: 2014-04-13 06:45:29 Post subject:

《钓岛风云》由五绝换成七绝，内容更加显豁明快。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-04-13 09:14:49 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

《钓岛风云》由五绝换成七绝，内容更加显豁明快。

谢谢黄老师！

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Posted: 2014-04-14 10:30:22 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝钓岛风云（二）
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庆宏兄国耻不忘，一片赤诚。另：钓鱼岛应在东海而非黄海，请查之。
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Posted: 2014-04-14 13:15:22 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝钓岛风云（二）
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庆宏兄国耻不忘，一片赤诚。另：钓鱼岛应在东海而非黄海，请查之。

谢谢晓鸣兄提醒，应该修改，钓鱼岛在东海。我写成黄海主要是因为联想到甲午海战。

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Posted: 2014-04-15 13:03:57 Post subject:

谢谢晓鸣兄。推敲再改：七绝钓岛风云（二）钓鱼岛上无鱼钓，疆海风疾起浪涛。甲午当年成国耻，内忧外患几时消？

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Posted: 2014-04-18 11:51:03 Post subject:

钓鱼岛上无鱼钓——起笔不凡！欣赏。

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Posted: 2014-04-18 16:00:36 Post subject:

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钓鱼岛上无鱼钓——起笔不凡！欣赏。

谢谢冰清老师鼓励！

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Posted: 2014-04-23 07:15:05 Post subject:

庆宏兄追求完美，令人钦佩。 _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2014-04-23 23:57:20 Post subject:

庆宏兄忧国忧民令人钦佩！、、、

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Posted: 2014-04-24 13:13:36 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

庆宏兄追求完美，令人钦佩。

谢谢晓鸣兄鼓励！

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Posted: 2014-04-24 13:14:08 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

庆宏兄忧国忧民令人钦佩！、、、

谢谢笑聊兄！

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