qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-13 05:04:00 Post subject: 七绝 钓岛风云(二) |
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七绝 钓岛风云(二)
钓鱼岛上无鱼钓,东海风云起浪涛。
甲午当年成国耻,内忧外患几时消?
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旧作:
五绝 钓岛风云
钓岛浪涛高,长天涌怒潮。
百年屈辱史,甲午恨难消。
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五绝 黄岩岛/钓鱼岛
波涛几岛礁,争吵调门高。
君看英阿战,挥军万里遥。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-13 06:45:29 Post subject: |
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《钓岛风云》由五绝换成七绝,内容更加显豁明快。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-13 09:14:49 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
《钓岛风云》由五绝换成七绝,内容更加显豁明快。 |
谢谢黄老师! |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2014-04-14 10:30:22 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
七绝 钓岛风云(二)
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庆宏兄国耻不忘,一片赤诚。另:钓鱼岛应在东海而非黄海,请查之。 _________________ Daxia |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-14 13:15:22 Post subject: |
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Daxia wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
七绝 钓岛风云(二)
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庆宏兄国耻不忘,一片赤诚。另:钓鱼岛应在东海而非黄海,请查之。 |
谢谢晓鸣兄提醒,应该修改,钓鱼岛在东海。我写成黄海主要是因为联想到甲午海战。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-15 13:03:57 Post subject: |
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谢谢晓鸣兄。推敲再改:
七绝 钓岛风云(二)
钓鱼岛上无鱼钓,疆海风疾起浪涛。
甲午当年成国耻,内忧外患几时消? |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2014-04-18 11:51:03 Post subject: |
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钓鱼岛上无鱼钓——起笔不凡!欣赏。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-18 16:00:36 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
钓鱼岛上无鱼钓——起笔不凡!欣赏。 |
谢谢冰清老师鼓励! |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2014-04-23 07:15:05 Post subject: |
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庆宏兄追求完美,令人钦佩。 _________________ Daxia |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-23 23:57:20 Post subject: |
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庆宏兄忧国忧民令人钦佩!、、、 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-24 13:13:36 Post subject: |
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Daxia wrote: |
庆宏兄追求完美,令人钦佩。 |
谢谢晓鸣兄鼓励! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2014-04-24 13:14:08 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
庆宏兄忧国忧民令人钦佩!、、、 |
谢谢笑聊兄! |
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