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红酒红罗帐
品玉
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PostPosted: 2007-04-30 01:42:41    Post subject: 红酒红罗帐 Reply with quote

红酒我忘了
你是飞天袖间
撒落的那瓣
鲜蓓的玫瑰
要么你浓郁醇清

红酒你滑过我的腹壁
润透蓝色的心地
润赤心波浩涟
淹了海的府底

红酒,你的玉液在水晶体内
涓流出久远的悠扬
卞钟的音韵
伴着贵妃醉步踏响
荒搁千年的红楼
古唐的香裙醉撩
呲诧风流杯觥
染了,雪地里的罗帐

红酒,撷着天女指间的纷芳
溢满唇池
宛如丰腴的乳房
甘甜的乳汁
铮铮君子醉卧觞隅

红酒,就在今夜
梦海的驳船
款款而行
洒一滴你的琼浆
香了,我别离的岸边
醉了,我去的港湾
红了,我的红罗帐

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PostPosted: 2007-04-30 02:52:49    Post subject: Re: 红酒红罗帐 Reply with quote

品玉 wrote:
红酒我忘了
你是飞天袖间
撒落的那瓣
鲜蓓的玫瑰
要么你浓郁醇清

红酒你滑过我的腹壁
润透蓝色的心地

润赤心波浩涟
淹了海的府底

红酒,你的玉液在水晶体内
涓流出久远的悠扬
卞钟的音韵
伴着贵妃醉步踏响
荒搁千年的红楼
古唐的香裙醉撩
呲诧风流杯觥
染了,雪地里的罗帐


红酒,撷着天女指间的纷芳
溢满唇池
宛如丰腴的乳房
甘甜的乳汁
铮铮君子醉卧觞隅

红酒,就在今夜
梦海的驳船
款款而行
洒一滴你的琼浆

香了,我别离的岸边
醉了,我去的港湾
红了,我的红罗帐




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PostPosted: 2007-04-30 04:56:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

细节的抒写挺到位的,问好
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PostPosted: 2007-05-06 23:53:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!真的很感谢你们的支持!
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