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月的批评(六首)
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 22:34:50    Post subject: 月的批评(六首) Reply with quote

*秋日

公园的长椅铺满阳光
猫坐一会儿
不知跑到哪里去了
现在我坐在上面
有点想睡的感觉
没有狗尾草的梦可做
我只是想一只猫
继续坐在怀里
享受一会秋天的隐隐约约


*说说话

找一个陌生人说说话
还能说出一些希望
风还能吹动窗帘
她还能感受到玻璃的明亮
怎会在她的翅膀上飞翔太久
当她微笑地说声再见
紫色的黄昏正染透衣衫
世界真的没有什么秘密
摸了摸腰,有点酸痛


*月的批评

这些生硬牵强的语句
怎能会表达出你的意涵
想着月的批评
躲进了一块大石的背后
其实皎洁的月只是随便说说而已
其实简陋的内心只是随便听听而已
所以一直没有带戒子
一直蜷坐在庙宇之外
看烧香的人一个个走过


*大嫂

这几瓶酒
由于税
才显得昂贵
这几句话
由于美
才能盛满杯
可大嫂不会醉
她轻蔑所有的佐料
轻蔑所有的沙尘暴


*竖琴

一把给了黎明,天亮了
一把给了黄昏,天黑了
再也没有竖琴了
天亮了,有人悄悄死亡
天黑了,有人哇地诞生
再也没有竖琴了
玫瑰知道了情感的终点
可我还是那么随便
一张口,就把沙子说成了骨灰


*樱桃树枝

樱桃树枝上结着樱桃
却不是我们回忆的时候
夏天的裙子摇摆不停
没有任何可以暧昧的分秒
樱桃一颗颗红起来又紫下去
我们的石头一样没有心跳
我们都不是酒徒
我们总是本能地拒绝疼痛
把灯一盏盏灭了,直到有了安详


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PostPosted: 2013-11-08 14:50:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组有意境,有感觉的诗,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2013-11-14 17:22:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢 问好
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