Lake 举人
Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2007-08-23 17:31:41 Post subject: PM |
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This may not be regarded as a poem for it is just out of an impulse when I received a personal message from Nia, a Turkish poet friend who I miss very much. So I penned it down without much refinement.
PM
If it were not for that wake-up call
She would’ve been still in hibernation
For how long
She really does not know
If it were not for that wake-up call
She would've been still wandering around
For how far
She really does not know
But that personal message
Such a sweet, tender reminder
Popping up “how have you been?”
Lights up a gloomy day
Electrifies her still heart
A lone bird trailed behind
Now goes “flap, flap, flap”
Over tree tops, up again
Into the bosom of the sky
. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kokho 进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-09-06 14:04:09 Post subject: |
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A very touching recital poem - well done
. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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Lake 举人
Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2007-09-06 17:43:52 Post subject: |
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Your comment 'recital' sounds negative to me, and 'well done' , equivalent to 拜读。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kokho 进士出身
Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-09-20 12:36:15 Post subject: |
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you think too much
paranoia ?? _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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