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山光水色

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Posted: 2013-10-22 05:10:11 Post subject: 山光水色

欣赏！问候朋友！发错了贴子，才知道原来这里也可以修改的。顺便再帖一首吧。闪光水色/俭秋斋又是春天啊，柳树上披满了一挂一挂新绿的风羞涩的叶子躲躲闪闪把所有春天里的动词缠在春风细软的腰上让湖边的新柳，一摇，再摇牛羊在草丛里藏起眼睛山坳里，一缕炊烟，袅袅当一首渔歌从小船里飞出江水清清，我的脚步轻轻你水墨里的故事，在一只横笛的重音孔上，轻轻---

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Posted: 2013-10-22 05:14:54 Post subject: 月夜

月夜摇一摇，桂花的暗香就撒满街巷而堤岸拥挤，把河水从星光里分离出来叮咚响着向远方延伸柳叶单薄的目光已盛不下枯黄的秋色不停向下俯身那些徘徊于白昼和黑夜之间的风反复试探灯光下的背影它不知道灰尘已竖起一道一道的墙你看到一张张麻木的脸，却听不到一句清晰的语言

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Posted: 2013-10-22 20:24:12 Post subject:

看到一张张麻木的脸，却听不到一句清晰的语言

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Posted: 2013-10-22 22:05:38 Post subject:

俭秋斋 wrote:

月夜
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我俩题材撞车了，哈哈！
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Posted: 2013-10-22 22:09:33 Post subject:

那些徘徊于白昼和黑夜之间的风反复试探灯光下的背影它不知道灰尘已竖起一道一道的墙 --------- 雾霾！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-10-23 17:58:45 Post subject:

年年岁岁月相似~~时间是最厚的灰尘~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2013-10-31 09:45:37 Post subject:

环境的雾霾与人类心中的雾霾同生长着。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:38:32 Post subject: 谢谢来读！问好白水！

问好白水！

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:40:25 Post subject:

谢谢远狼！问好！一会儿我去看看你的同题。远握！

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:41:14 Post subject:

谢谢红红来读！问好！远握！

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:42:22 Post subject:

谢谢一无！问好！

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:56:50 Post subject:

俭秋斋 wrote:

谢谢远狼！问好！一会儿我去看看你的同题。远握！

可不是同题呢，但都是月夜的心事。呵呵 Very Happy

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