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祝詩集生日快樂
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PostPosted: 2012-11-08 07:08:11    Post subject: 祝詩集生日快樂 Reply with quote

祝詩集生日快樂


自樹枝落到地面的中間
葉/頁//謁/夜呈現數狀態

孤獨, 青蛙, 楓
固態, 液態, 氣態
那一片最好的
也是最狡猾的

兔子住在三個彈孔
我想
脊椎是骨牌
摸到了尾疤
一股輕震動
像風吹過一圈蠟燭
訪客


About the poetry book 中間狀態 by 葉子鳥.
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PostPosted: 2012-11-09 17:01:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

拓扑之意。

颠扑不破的想象。

快枪手的弹药库。


底蕴,读着很棒。末段显功力。
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