莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-29 14:53:17 Post subject: 《七律·别秋》 |
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恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
辞歌律婉轻吟缓,别语怀幽低诉迟。
夜雪临窗倾旧绪,晨冰盖地纵新思。
挥毫不作潸然句,泼墨应留豪放诗。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-30 05:51:36 Post subject: |
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既婉约,又豪放。 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-10-30 09:46:07 Post subject: |
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恰是西风叶落时,莹雪挥毫赋新诗。结句最欣赏。祝好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-30 10:21:10 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
既婉约,又豪放。 |
谢谢qinghong兄点评!偶然抒怀而已。问好 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-30 10:23:49 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
恰是西风叶落时,莹雪挥毫赋新诗。结句最欣赏。祝好! |
谢谢晓松gg关注和点评!嘻嘻,随便发一感慨而。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-30 11:56:15 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
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起承转合皆妙。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-30 13:39:43 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
莹雪 wrote: |
恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
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起承转合皆妙。 |
谢谢您的点评!问好! |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2013-10-31 01:06:09 Post subject: |
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才女!字句皆欣赏。 _________________ Daxia |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-10-31 09:48:20 Post subject: |
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拜读 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-31 10:43:22 Post subject: |
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谢谢您的鼓励!莹雪继续努力。 |
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