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《七律·别秋》
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-10-29 14:53:17    Post subject: 《七律·别秋》 Reply with quote

恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
辞歌律婉轻吟缓,别语怀幽低诉迟。
夜雪临窗倾旧绪,晨冰盖地纵新思。
挥毫不作潸然句,泼墨应留豪放诗。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 05:51:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

既婉约,又豪放。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 09:18:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

已读。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 09:46:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

恰是西风叶落时,莹雪挥毫赋新诗。结句最欣赏。祝好!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 10:21:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
既婉约,又豪放。
谢谢qinghong兄点评!偶然抒怀而已。问好
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 10:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
恰是西风叶落时,莹雪挥毫赋新诗。结句最欣赏。祝好!
谢谢晓松gg关注和点评!嘻嘻,随便发一感慨而。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 11:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
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起承转合皆妙。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-10-30 13:39:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
恰是西风叶落时,悠然菊瘦舞东篱。
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起承转合皆妙。

谢谢您的点评!问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-31 01:06:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

才女!字句皆欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-31 09:48:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2013-10-31 10:43:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

Daxia wrote:
才女!字句皆欣赏。
谢谢您的鼓励!莹雪继续努力。
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