晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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 Posted: 2013-10-05 11:07:35 Post subject: 青玉案 ● 天涯路 |
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青玉案 ● 天涯路
步宋代贺铸《青玉案》原韵
蓦然回首天涯路，
眼前雾，飞来去。
关隘关山都已度。
梦中犹现，云堆涛怒，身在波峰处。
廉颇不必嗟时暮，
能饭能诗会吟句。
争奈鬓霜添几许。
人生如弈，世情如故，常伴风和雨。
附： 青玉案 （宋）贺铸
凌波不过横塘路，
但目送，芳尘去。
锦瑟年华谁与度？
月台花榭，琐窗朱户，只有春知处。
碧云冉冉蘅皋暮。
彩笔新题断肠句。
试问闲愁都几许？
一川烟草，满城风絮，梅子黄时雨。 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2013-10-05 21:22:26 Post subject: |
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哇，晓松君厉害！翻出一个新境界！
问候。 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2013-10-07 09:22:09 Post subject: |
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| 谢冰清老师鼓励，我也是在尝试，学步中。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2013-10-09 11:19:06 Post subject: |
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| 拜读。问好 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2013-10-10 10:49:40 Post subject: |
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| 问候莹雪mm！ |
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秋叶
秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
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| Posted: 2013-10-13 00:58:42 Post subject: |
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人生如弈，世情如故，常伴风和雨。
说得正是，晓松兄好词！ |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2013-10-13 13:02:18 Post subject: |
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| 深刻！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2013-10-14 09:10:48 Post subject: |
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| 谢秋叶、庆宏二兄鼓励，祝好！ |
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