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风吹泾河

陇上雪
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Joined: 01 Mar 2013
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Posted: 2013-10-08 19:58:25 Post subject: 风吹泾河

从平凉城每一栋高楼上都能找到泾河的一块骨头正如从儿女身上能够找到父母亲的基因城市越长越高泾河越来越虚弱她还继续用蔫瘪的乳房喂养着沿岸嗷嗷待哺的庄稼母亲啊，她在沙坑和卵石间颤巍巍地行走单薄的身子被秋风吹得更瘦不知还能走多远

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-10-09 08:44:53 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

安红红
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Posted: 2013-10-09 11:08:11 Post subject:

挺朴实的手法，喜欢。似乎没有写开，也许内心还有更深的情绪，没挖掘出。多写。 _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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