弹剑作歌
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 Posted: 2007-03-11 22:15:33 Post subject: 七律 登千佛山 |
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秋意萧条好独行，风中迈步越重林。
猿啼鸟隐苍山寂，叶落枝横古道阴。
水出断崖成怒瀑，人逢险境起雄心。
攀凌绝顶回头望，一样寒风别样音。 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-03-11 22:39:49 Post subject: |
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古人写诗歌, 也不过如此吧
欣赏
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凤舞九天
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| Posted: 2007-03-12 16:35:32 Post subject: |
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好诗！一气呵成。
看来大家都偏爱平水韵 
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弹剑作歌
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| Posted: 2007-03-13 01:36:30 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
古人写诗歌, 也不过如此吧
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多谢多谢，弹剑愧不敢当！ |
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一无
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