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沦陷的城池

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-09-28 15:52:20 Post subject: 沦陷的城池

陈兵十万团团围住你的城池像先秦中原大地某场经典战事整整一个下午，我持续敲响攻城的战鼓你端坐城头大旗一挥，箭头如雨顷刻刺穿黑压压逼近的盾牌一再倒下的云梯伏在黄昏短暂的平静里喘息奇袭，子夜的勇士奋力撞开坚固的城门。我骑上高头大马俨然是凯旋入城的拿破仑筋疲力尽的战马突然跃失前蹄在滑铁炉我沦为一名战俘被你永久关进心灵的囚笼

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Posted: 2013-09-28 20:30:32 Post subject:

着力似乎过于集中，也硬了些。当然也许是我不了解拿破仑的故事 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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