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绝句题《竹》画
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PostPosted: 2013-07-15 16:49:04    Post subject: 绝句题《竹》画 Reply with quote
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月影陪君走，倩姿谁异常？
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-16 06:10:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗中有画。笑聊兄能否配上画图？
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PostPosted: 2013-07-16 15:57:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
庆宏兄你好！我就是不会操作呀。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-17 05:27:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊 wrote:
庆宏兄你好！我就是不会操作呀。


可询问岛主或白水兄。
改：

月步随君走，影移荷醉池。
清风任潇洒，伴我赋新诗。

再改：月下婆娑影，羞声响耳旁。
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-18 09:29:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
一幅竹画，写出人的活动，因而更富生机。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-23 07:44:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊 wrote:
文/笑聊

月影陪君走，倩姿谁异常？
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。

似乎是看到了月下竹子了 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-07-30 06:06:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
一幅竹画，写出人的活动，因而更富生机。

问候黄老！
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月步随君走，影移荷醉池。
清风任潇洒，伴我赋新诗。

再改：月下婆娑影，羞声响耳旁。
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-30 06:07:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
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月影陪君走，倩姿谁异常？
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。

似乎是看到了月下竹子了 Laughing


问候秋叶兄！做了改动。

改：

月步随君走，影移荷醉池。
清风任潇洒，伴我赋新诗。

再改：月下婆娑影，羞声响耳旁。
清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。



IMG_6478四川重庆美协熊伟先生画，潘建清咏，毛明强书：月影随君走，高吟倩女妆。清风任潇洒，伴我入西厢。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-04 12:33:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
终于学会了上传。惭愧 啊！ Embarassed
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