司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-29 20:39:40 Post subject: 五律 . 咏牡丹 |
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五律 . 咏牡丹
司马从戎
丽压众香国,霓裳盖世惊。
姚黄蕊赛锦,魏紫瓣争盈。
容采倾乡野,丰腴动古城。
荣华虽有竟,花落岂无情?! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-07-29 23:14:35 Post subject: |
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欣赏! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-30 06:15:28 Post subject: |
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学习。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-07-30 07:04:24 Post subject: |
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旧作和诗友
七绝 洛阳牡丹
牡丹华贵沁芬芳, 风骨铮铮藐女皇。
国色天香酬百姓, 一朝绽放古都香。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:32:51 Post subject: |
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不俗之作, 学习了。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:55:23 Post subject: |
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谢谢先生鼓励。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:55:54 Post subject: |
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谢谢先生鼓励。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:56:47 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
旧作和诗友
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大作拜读,学习了。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:57:25 Post subject: |
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谢谢先生鼓励。 |
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