司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-14 19:58:41 Post subject: 五律 . 咏雪 |
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五律 . 咏雪
司马从戎
大雪潇潇下,飞禽别客枝。
人间呈一色,天地隔几丝。
雪落徘徊意,梅开绮丽姿。
纷花归故里,万物待春时。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-07-16 06:12:59 Post subject: |
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结句余味长 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-16 15:58:51 Post subject: |
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欣赏结句! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-16 19:40:45 Post subject: |
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多谢先生鼓励。 |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-16 19:41:43 Post subject: |
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多谢先生鼓励。 |
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