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投稿第三期:生活(外二)
郭全华
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PostPosted: 2007-04-11 21:09:43    Post subject: 投稿第三期:生活(外二) Reply with quote

※生活※

01
孩子望天
扯白云

沉重的书包

02
女人在超市
为乳房
购买
坚挺的房子

03
大街
和广告
勾肩搭背
文联
在破旧的楼里
面黄肌瘦

04
吃同一条猪身体的人
有的微笑
有的骂街
有的长出好看的身体
任男人追

05
隔壁的大人
一天摸一次
儿子的头
就像摸
北大的门楣

※总有一些人不愿跟着你※

他们有的抬头有的低头
和你走一条街
现在可能走在你前面
他们偶尔用暗淡的眼神
眺望远方和生活
他们不想拿剩余的力量
粉刷你的光芒
如果一切匆匆消失
他们的简单生活里
还剩略有盈余的草根性

※永远的对面※

当我把女人
揽在怀中
占据着
新鲜的幸福时
请你不要愤怒

当我把鲜花
栽种在
庭前院后
饱受战火的人们
请你原谅我

当我把假日
当成席梦思
舒展四肢时
人民路上的清洁工
请接受我的道歉

看到沙尘暴
再一次扬起
我为自己祖先
用掉了过多的树木
而深深难过

看到更多道路
占据了水稻的位置
看不到边的城市
你挖完我瘦弱的根
还要扫清什么障碍
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借助诗歌,努力把自己活成一棵树,白天向上,夜里向下.
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倾听书卷
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Location: 江苏常熟
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PostPosted: 2007-04-11 23:41:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵性灵气的作品.问好全华
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-04-12 03:42:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

隽永小诗。关注生活现象,是诗人诗中“大我”的表现。喜欢第一首,
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郭全华
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PostPosted: 2007-04-12 21:17:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢两位的肯定.握手
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-04-22 00:42:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有灵性。富于想象!视角独特!
人民路是哪个城市?
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PostPosted: 2007-04-23 17:08:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活处处有诗
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