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				|  Posted: 2013-06-25 22:53:12    Post subject: ove |   |  
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				| ove 
 we all have pains and faults
 
 we freeze them
 
 stone cold
 
 to the world unti
 
 one day
 
 they met
 
 into hot tears
 
 tear you apart and
 complete
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 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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				|  Posted: 2013-06-27 04:15:15    Post subject: |   |  
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				| What is 'ove'. Do you purposely omit a letter as in 'unti' at the end of L4 as well? _________________
 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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				|  Posted: 2013-06-27 04:35:26    Post subject: |   |  
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				| love until
 melt
 
 tears tear
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 (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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