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北京地下室

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-08 15:32:00 Post subject: 北京地下室

北京地下室周道模打工农民，像拔出的树根蜂拥，钻进这城市地穴门碰痛门，声音挤破声音自烧饭菜，饱满生活的气息乡土梦，被都市的诱惑打捆地下梦，被地上一层一层的梦压扁疲劳、汗渍、渴望、叹息屈辱、伤残、关爱、竞争 ——这身心疯长的根须茁壮楼房，繁华时代风景 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-06-09 16:34:06 Post subject:

屈辱、伤残、关爱、竞争 ——这身心疯长的根须茁壮楼房，繁华时代风学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-06-11 15:18:36 Post subject:

节日快乐！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-14 09:35:47 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

屈辱、伤残、关爱、竞争
...

谢谢到访地下室！地上的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-06-14 15:54:51 Post subject:

这些意象汇集的诗意，有时代感，欣赏，问候

金金
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Posted: 2013-06-14 22:59:09 Post subject:

我读着很憋屈。有种因觉得未尽而生出的思考冲动。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-06-15 09:02:56 Post subject:

打工农民，像拔出的树根蜂拥，钻进这城市地穴 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-15 15:22:20 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

节日快乐！！

谢谢山城子老师到访！夏日的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-15 15:31:30 Post subject:

李庆贺 wrote:

这些意象汇集的诗意，有时代感，欣赏，问候

谢谢智者的鼓励！夏日清凉的问候！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-17 17:35:34 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

我读着很憋屈。有种因觉得未尽而生出的思考冲动。

金金的感觉很正常。一是不想写得太长，二是读者再创造不是很好吗？
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-06-18 17:22:20 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

打工农民，像拔出的树根

蜂拥，钻进这城市地穴

谢谢杯中的读引！清凉的问候！
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