姚阳辉
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拧开瀑布的闸门
一帘水漫过我
冲掉一路风尘仆仆的粉尘
冲散炎热发酸的汗味
冲淡几许疲惫
冲开一些烦心事
四十年了
弥漫的尘埃堆积在思想的角落
锈蚀的钙质压弯梦想的树枝
再次把闸门拧至极限，我
紧闭双目，任喷涌的水瀑
冲进思想的缝隙
冲进过去或未来
当我睁开眼睛，突然发现
水瀑中的水垢已溶蚀成一尊尊钟乳石
座落在思想的角落里
厚厚的尘埃之上 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2013-06-08 11:45:35 Post subject: |
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拧开瀑布的闸门
好
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山城子
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| Posted: 2013-06-08 14:28:20 Post subject: |
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瀑布都是自然流淌的呢！设不了闸门的！！
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姚阳辉
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| Posted: 2013-06-09 15:17:14 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
拧开瀑布的闸门
好 |
谢谢点评！问好！ |
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姚阳辉
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| 山城子 wrote: |
| 瀑布都是自然流淌的呢！设不了闸门的！！ |
人造瀑布吧！问好！ |
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