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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 11:00:24    Post subject: 淋浴 Reply with quote

拧开瀑布的闸门
一帘水漫过我
冲掉一路风尘仆仆的粉尘
冲散炎热发酸的汗味
冲淡几许疲惫
冲开一些烦心事
四十年了
弥漫的尘埃堆积在思想的角落
锈蚀的钙质压弯梦想的树枝

再次把闸门拧至极限,我
紧闭双目,任喷涌的水瀑
冲进思想的缝隙
冲进过去或未来
当我睁开眼睛,突然发现
水瀑中的水垢已溶蚀成一尊尊钟乳石
座落在思想的角落里
厚厚的尘埃之上
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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 11:45:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

拧开瀑布的闸门

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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 14:28:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

瀑布都是自然流淌的呢!设不了闸门的!!
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PostPosted: 2013-06-09 15:17:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
拧开瀑布的闸门
谢谢点评!问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-06-09 15:18:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
瀑布都是自然流淌的呢!设不了闸门的!!
人造瀑布吧!问好!
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