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秋 风 和 树
李石碱
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PostPosted: 2013-05-16 21:37:31    Post subject: 秋 风 和 树 Reply with quote

无辜的秋风

总是

背着千载都不明真相的咒骂

落荒而逃

有人偏说看见它带着落叶私奔



只有一片片落叶明白

树木的心是残忍的

它不会和自己一辈子生死相共



树茎和树根

它们榨干了每一代树叶的青春

然后又暗中挖断了树叶回家的路

他假装伟岸

秋天嫁祸于人
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山城子
榜眼


Joined: 23 May 2007
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Location: 中国贵州
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PostPosted: 2013-05-16 23:00:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知是何寓意,费猜想!
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李庆贺
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PostPosted: 2013-05-19 12:40:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

然后又暗中挖断了树叶回家的路
他假装伟岸
秋天嫁祸于人

欣赏——
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远狼
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 11:24:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

颠覆性的意致
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PostPosted: 2013-05-27 08:31:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾还可以更棒,不过现在已经很光彩了


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