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藏头五言集句

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-14 09:22:02 Post subject: 藏头五言集句

白日依山尽，【唐】王之渙云生结海楼。【唐】李白闲门向山路，【唐】刘眥虚人在木兰舟。【唐】马戴 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-14 09:33:03 Post subject:

太阳正沿着山岭慢慢西下，煦丽的云霞演生出奇妙之海市蜃楼，在美丽的大自然中，人生恬淡悠闲，漫步青山，舟伴綠水，怡情于山水之清静幽雅！随缘順意，那又何必耿耿于怀如黄昏時分的古稀之年；又何需去计较是海市蜃楼的美丽演化呢！而以清徹婉约之调，如仙人泛莲花輕舟！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-05-14 10:21:28 Post subject:

白云兄嵌名妙集巧集，字稳意切，不易也！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-05-14 10:44:08 Post subject:

集句又嵌名，十分难得。

笑聊
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2013-05-15 05:25:22 Post subject:

这才是真正的高难度集句诗！向老师学习。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-15 09:28:05 Post subject:

謝黄兄赏评！这是向古诗吸取营养的一点体会。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-15 09:30:03 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏！这是学习古为今用。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-15 09:40:10 Post subject:

謝笑聊鼓励！这是尝试用古诗的精粹来磨炼一下自已的笔锋。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-05-15 19:11:36 Post subject:

白云老师谦虚了。这个很不容易哦！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-16 05:15:58 Post subject:

笑聊，人一世学一世呢！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-05-17 08:13:09 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

笑聊，人一世学一世呢！

老师说得对。得空也学老师藏头集诗或词。致夏祺！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-05-17 11:02:09 Post subject:

笑聊，我们互研互学，生活才更添风彩！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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