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藏头五言集句
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PostPosted: 2013-05-14 09:22:02    Post subject: 藏头五言集句 Reply with quote

白 日 依 山 尽 ,【唐】王之渙
云 生 结 海 楼 。【唐】李白
闲 门 向 山 路 ,【唐】刘眥虚
人 在 木 兰 舟 。【唐】马戴
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PostPosted: 2013-05-14 09:33:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

太阳正沿着山岭慢慢西下,煦丽的云霞演生出奇妙之海市蜃楼,在美丽的大自然中,人生恬淡悠闲,漫步青山,舟伴綠水,怡情于山水之清静幽雅!
随缘順意,那又何必耿耿于怀如黄昏時分的古稀之年;又何需去计较是海市蜃楼的美丽演化呢!而以清徹婉约之调,如仙人泛莲花輕舟!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-14 10:21:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云兄嵌名妙集巧集,字稳意切,不易也!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-14 10:44:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

集句又嵌名,十分难得。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-15 05:25:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

这才是真正的高难度集句诗!向老师学习。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-15 09:28:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝黄兄赏评!这是向古诗吸取营养的一点体会。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-15 09:30:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏!这是学习古为今用。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-15 09:40:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊鼓励!这是尝试用古诗的精粹来磨炼一下自已的笔锋。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-15 19:11:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云老师谦虚了。这个很不容易哦!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-16 05:15:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,人一世学一世呢!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-17 08:13:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
笑聊,人一世学一世呢!

老师说得对。得空也学老师藏头集诗或词。致夏祺!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-17 11:02:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,我们互研互学,生活才更添风彩!
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