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【原创】《苹果》4首

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-05-11 20:41:32 Post subject: 【原创】《苹果》4首

《苹果》（1）文/李庆贺手捧一颗苹果，看不见你的种子却实实在在的在我的手里此刻，我怎么也想不起开花的过程是痛苦还是欢乐，你周身的红色在宣示着什么，内心的伤无法忘却那一刻绽放的美，就这样在阳光抑或月光下幻化成一颗红的发亮的心，在秋天的枝头小心翼翼地等待，一只手温柔的碰触，把梦摘取《苹果》（2）你脸上的这个斑点是黑夜留下的谎言我不想被揭穿你内心已经蓄满了甜蜜却抵不过人们挑剔的眼睛我是爱美的希望脸颊上肌肤的细腻我也是爱浪漫的希望红地毯铺满通往天堂的路因一个斑点而绝望虚无的攀比最终让我们走向死亡你已经站得够高看得够远那里风大不易长久生活我们不能因惧怕红蜘蛛而远离人间一生在孤独、恐惧中度过《苹果》（3）当我把一瓣苹果放在嘴边这段前世修来的姻缘已经红透我不能就这样把你一口吃掉从嘴唇到肌肤我们经历了太多的风雨我要在你变成我成长的营养前把你吻遍也要把你牢牢地记在心中如果你感到幸福请你把心中蓄满的泪水流下来我已摆好了宴席迎取你《苹果》（4）看见你我就坚信我的爱是一朵能够结果的苹果花比一颗苹果还要红的脸蛋叶子也掩藏不住你的心纯洁羞涩我把口袋中捂了十多年的手伸出去用一种温度碰触另一种高度我端起一杯爱情的美酒不愿意开灯也让你轻轻地端起 2013.5.12

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Posted: 2013-05-12 08:44:42 Post subject:

四首都很漂亮。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-05-12 08:55:00 Post subject:

欣赏。“我怎么也想不起开花的过程是痛苦还是欢乐，你周身的红色在宣示着什么，内心的伤无法忘却那一刻绽放的美” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-12 12:56:56 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

四首都很漂亮。

感谢诗友雅正，欢迎交流，远握写作快乐！

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Posted: 2013-05-12 13:22:45 Post subject:

这四只苹果，满足了视觉和味觉！ _________________ 做简单的人，写些简单的诗，过简单的生活！

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Posted: 2013-05-12 16:58:50 Post subject:

构思新颖，欣赏。 _________________ 博客地址：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/3326663842

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Posted: 2013-05-12 17:48:06 Post subject:

梅树林 wrote:

这四只苹果，满足了视觉和味觉！

感谢诗友雅正，指导，远握写作快乐！

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Posted: 2013-05-12 17:53:31 Post subject:

童话 wrote:

构思新颖，欣赏。

感谢童话诗友赏读，远握，欢迎交流！诚祝写作快乐！

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Posted: 2013-05-14 19:45:56 Post subject:

我认为之一最好。

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