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 Posted: 2013-05-12 10:24:06 Post subject: 牛仔 |
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做一名牛仔
最后的牛仔
象风一样驰骋
得得的马蹄
越过山岗
越过荒漠之城
让旷野的风
让远方的云
荡去心底的沉沦
用夸父逐日的姿势
奔跑
世界，我要浴火重生
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李庆贺
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| Posted: 2013-05-12 12:49:37 Post subject: |
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| 凝练，内质的好诗，欣赏 |
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梅树林
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Joined: 11 May 2013
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Location: 中国上海(暂住)
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| Posted: 2013-05-12 13:24:44 Post subject: |
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让旷野的风
让远方的云
荡去心底的沉沦
欣赏。
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做简单的人，写些简单的诗，过简单的生活！ |
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童话
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| Posted: 2013-05-12 16:12:29 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢诗友梅树林，远握！ |
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童话
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| Posted: 2013-05-12 16:15:44 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢李庆贺诗友的鼓励，远握！ |
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远狼
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Joined: 04 Nov 2012
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| Posted: 2013-05-12 23:26:55 Post subject: |
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牛仔、夸父。结合得有趣，一步横跨太平洋，但有点突兀
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童话
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| Posted: 2013-05-13 08:27:15 Post subject: |
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问候远狼诗友，谢谢点评。
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