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白水
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Posted: 2007-03-10 06:42:19 Post subject: 麦之王(外两首)

<麦之王> 轻轻摘去你的王冠 , 接过佩剑. 解开你沉甸甸的盔甲忘了吧, 指向苍天的锐气, 今晚是谁拈来一袭夜幕, 温柔的盖上王者之风举起那枚闪亮的餐刀剖开胸膛, 面对着你饥饿的臣民, 我终于醒了, 半只球形的全麦面包才是你梦寐以求的归宿举起那根血红的手指在商标上珍重的写下, 这里葬着我的恋人 <麦浪> 天是黄的, 地是黄的皮肤是黄的麦穗也是黄的我摘一颗露珠挂到天上你说这里有水流过 <轨> 想起麦田就想起铁轨想起铁轨, 就想起平炉想起平炉就想起翻滚的钢水这烫眼的红, 让我想起铁轨上的血

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-03-10 07:08:23 Post subject:

最近，很多人们怀念海子。。。问好 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-10 13:17:49 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

最近，
很多人们
怀念
海子
。。。

问好

谢谢你.问好
在这里我只是把海子作为诗人的代名词吧.

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Posted: 2007-03-10 18:31:29 Post subject:

看出来了，笔力深厚！ _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

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Posted: 2007-03-11 08:33:40 Post subject:

樱花听雨 wrote:

看出来了，笔力深厚！

问好听雨

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-17 04:15:02 Post subject:

麦子王及麦浪都含义深刻,尤其后一首,很耐品~ 问好月光妹妹

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Posted: 2007-03-17 18:21:17 Post subject:

终于醒了, 半只球形的全麦面包才是你梦寐以求的归宿情趣，并且有深度。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-03-17 23:15:01 Post subject:

读来爽快且有意味！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-03-22 05:21:19 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

麦子王及麦浪都含义深刻,尤其后一首,很耐品~ Smile

问好月光妹妹

问好明月. 近来瞎忙, 回复迟了, 见谅.

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Posted: 2007-03-22 05:33:04 Post subject:

为我们早逝的诗人默哀 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2007-03-29 20:15:54 Post subject:

冲浪, 沙漠, 杨光, 谢谢你们阅读和鼓励.

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Posted: 2007-03-29 21:04:17 Post subject:

这几首，还是耐读。更喜欢第一首 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

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Posted: 2007-03-30 01:41:53 Post subject: 问好

这烫眼的红, 让我想起铁轨上的血一直在找一种语言，有时很彷徘，有时很痛，却从不停步！共勉！ _________________ 诗如生活,生活是诗！５２６０２０中国广东肇庆端州六路芙蓉西一街１７号翠芙居７０５王晓辉

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Posted: 2007-04-17 17:39:54 Post subject: 好诗

力透荧屏好功夫 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-04-17 18:50:55 Post subject:

读了有诗饿感。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-04-18 10:52:58 Post subject:

突飞猛进；））恭喜。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-18 22:25:28 Post subject:

一个有气势，二三招数一样！！都喜欢，学习！

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Posted: 2007-04-23 17:16:06 Post subject:

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:

这几首，还是耐读。

更喜欢第一首

谢谢你的鼓励, 问好

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Posted: 2007-04-23 17:17:35 Post subject: Re: 问好

王浥 wrote:

这烫眼的
红, 让我想起
铁轨上的
血

一直在找一种语言，有时很彷徘，有时很痛，却从不停步！
共勉！

谢谢理解. 问好.

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Posted: 2007-04-24 05:23:03 Post subject:

喜欢1 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

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