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【投稿】广木子诗歌二首：一条街（外一首）

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-05-01 13:02:54 Post subject: 【投稿】广木子诗歌二首：一条街（外一首）

◆一条街（外一首）文/中国甘肃：广木子这条街都被谁走旧了日头起起落落从未正视过我的窗口包括那只飞过三月的蝴蝶五月，一张藤椅外加一把蒲扇摇落多少美好的时光从这头到那头赶集的人散去后剩下烂菜叶，骨头和流浪狗夕阳一旦落下去漫长的夜就疼痛不止 ◆《影子》红桃花白月光黑影子允许他有秘密。允许他对着自己的影子说话也允许他用桃红涂抹嘴唇带着谁的芳香允许影子走在自己前面允许影子无限扩大的欲望覆盖一座山，甚至整个黑夜允许自己把影子踩在脚下却绝不允许自己的影子压住别人的影子允许自己的影子歪斜、弯曲也允许影子比自己走的快一点甚至允许影子离开自己不管他怎样悲伤，甚至生气影子，始终不离不弃他拍掉肩头的灰尘跌进椅子，他的影子一直在椅子下面聆听他的呼吸一长一短，一粗一细 2013.5.2

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Posted: 2013-05-01 22:49:28 Post subject:

却绝不允许自己的影子压住别人的影子 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-05-02 08:27:48 Post subject:

感性的诗歌问好 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-05-02 09:20:53 Post subject:

“赶集的人散去后剩下烂菜叶，骨头和流浪狗 ” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-02 13:26:16 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“赶集的人散去后
剩下烂菜叶，骨头和流浪狗 ”

感谢诗友雅正指导，远握！

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Posted: 2013-05-02 22:38:53 Post subject:

人性的思索

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Posted: 2013-05-03 13:27:49 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

人性的思索

感谢诗友赏读雅正，远握！

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Posted: 2013-05-03 21:48:47 Post subject:

第一首有味道。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-05-04 13:23:10 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

第一首有味道。

感谢诗友赏读交流，远握！

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Posted: 2013-05-05 10:11:41 Post subject:

五月，一张藤椅外加一把蒲扇摇落多少美好的时光好诗欣赏问好

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Posted: 2013-05-07 13:02:51 Post subject:

图书拥百城 wrote:

五月，一张藤椅
外加一把蒲扇
摇落多少美好的时光

好诗
欣赏
问好

感谢朋友赏读雅正，远握！

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Posted: 2013-05-08 20:02:56 Post subject:

每一节都精工细雕，很讲究语言的精致，拜读。

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Posted: 2013-05-10 21:28:27 Post subject:

写的好！~

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Posted: 2013-05-10 23:10:05 Post subject:

chensiqi wrote:

写的好！~

感谢诗友赏读雅正，远握！

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Posted: 2013-05-10 23:13:17 Post subject:

猎火 wrote:

每一节都精工细雕，很讲究语言的精致，拜读。

看到猎火老师的赏读很高兴，远握写作快乐！

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