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水手

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Posted: 2013-04-27 10:15:25 Post subject: 水手

水手文 / 一无潮起潮落吞没天地高也是海低也是海不怕醉的水手期待船下都是酒 2007—12—11 海上 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-27 13:29:17 Post subject:

很豪迈的短诗！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-04-27 16:24:56 Post subject:

凝练，富有诗意的一首，聊聊数语道出了水手情怀！

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Posted: 2013-04-27 21:27:04 Post subject:

船下都是酒

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Posted: 2013-04-28 01:18:05 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

船下都是酒

看来真是水手的感觉

一无当过水手吗？
我可不敢乘船过酒海 Wink

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Posted: 2013-04-28 08:53:42 Post subject: 谢谢山城子赐评

山城子 wrote:

很豪迈的短诗！！

谢谢赐评！上午好！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-28 08:55:09 Post subject: 谢谢李庆贺朋友赐评

李庆贺 wrote:

凝练，富有诗意的一首，聊聊数语道出了水手情怀！

谢谢朋友赐评！上午好！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-28 08:56:12 Post subject: 谢谢风动朋友赐评

风动 wrote:

船下都是酒

谢谢风动朋友赐评！安好！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-28 09:01:23 Post subject: 谢谢白水朋友

白水 Moonlight wrote:

风动 wrote:

船下都是酒

看来真是水手的感觉

...

谢谢提读赐评！
真的没有当过海里的水手。只是在人生的汪洋里随波逐流。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-28 11:12:27 Post subject:

人生如海，我们就是水手。 _________________ 墙漏风了

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Posted: 2013-04-28 11:25:27 Post subject:

顶一下，呵呵。 _________________ 诗歌可以使人理性，时时不忘作人良知。

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Posted: 2013-04-29 08:54:07 Post subject: 谢谢风墙

风墙 wrote:

人生如海，我们就是水手。

“人生如海，我们就是水手”。谢谢风墙朋友！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-29 08:54:57 Post subject: 谢谢枫桥夜泊

枫桥夜泊 wrote:

顶一下，呵呵。

谢谢枫桥夜泊朋友！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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