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高原上（外一首）
张云方
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PostPosted: 2013-02-28 23:59:12    Post subject: 高原上（外一首） Reply with quote
走上高原的人，并不会因此变得更高
很多人来了又走。风留下来
风象漫无边际奔走的河流，云是波涛汹涌的宁静
群山和草甸，瞩目于时间之外命定的荒凉
一只鹰盘旋在孤独的高度
接近天空。道路恍如一个蓝色的梦
古老地平线上再无黄金和箭镞
神明遗弃的领域，灵魂不再保持仰望的姿势



《秋来》

蓝色逐渐透明并持续壮阔
没有人期盼一片云。风随便从身边吹过
忘却不该忘却的温度
热情贫乏使天空清晰不再残酷

渐凉空气透入窗户，墙角积攒了尘土
镜子微笑。没有什么可以出人意料
阳光消瘦让人明白无误
池塘那边，不再有一支令箭荷花等我


抽空去审视一棵树，判断叶落的简单效果
时间用刀刃改变了生存结构
伤口愈合。黑色枝条获得新的美感
之前或者之后，它们会长出完全不同的花朵
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chenrunmin
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PostPosted: 2013-03-01 14:57:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
有意境,有感觉，感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好.
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风动
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PostPosted: 2013-03-02 11:26:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错,先提。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 01:46:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
哲理，不乏留白的思索空间
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张云方
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 11:06:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉，感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好.


谢谢朋友欣赏！
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张云方
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 11:07:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
风动 wrote:
不错,先提。

感谢！问好。
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张云方
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PostPosted: 2013-03-12 11:08:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哲理，不乏留白的思索空间

能够理解到作者的意图！谢谢！！
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钱晓强
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PostPosted: 2013-03-13 23:51:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
高原上，神往；秋来，平淡。
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张云方
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PostPosted: 2013-04-24 01:44:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
钱晓强 wrote:
高原上，神往；秋来，平淡。

有理！
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