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夏云镇，晚春时节（组诗）

山城子
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Posted: 2013-04-17 16:48:55 Post subject: 夏云镇，晚春时节（组诗）

夏云镇，晚春时节（组诗）文/ 山城子 ▲ 槐花开了山下寨头的一树树槐花都玉白玉白地站成排跟太阳说话说您的光照很知时节我们的香气最喜欢在明媚里散发说完都静穆在轻轻的南风中那些浓郁就向北恣情地溜达 ▲ 樱桃红了谁家婆娑一院的樱桃红了仿佛一夜间龙王把太多的玛瑙送达我跟老伴儿徜徉而入迎出来的是多年相熟的主人家有说有笑早就废弃了寒暄不饮酒不吃茶我们直奔树下 ▲ 玉米出土了翠亮翠亮裹着的两枚小叶儿就那样一排排地钻出土了多么稚嫩又多么顽强的生命体呀就像主人汗珠开放的质朴的花老伴儿在身边嘱咐我说小心脚下，千万别踩了它 ▲ 苦菜芽芽儿和玉米一起拱出土的还有苦菜芽芽儿一寸长的白根根一拔就出来了那种苦香的味道是永远的亲切我和老伴儿今天就是为这个来的田里劳作的农民田间也好客拉呱几句，过后一准是要好的朋友了 ▲ 挖野蒜一湾湖水之上，向阳的山坡之下两个人各执一铲不停地挖没想听满山的鸟啭，鸟啭一串串的照例像珠子一样在耳畔敲打转念故乡辽西为什么叫成响马菜但，不管叫什么味道都是那种清香的辣响马——家乡辽西一带对土匪的称谓，也叫胡子。 2013-4-18于黔中夏云镇 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-04-17 19:22:21 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉，感觉很美的，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2013-04-18 10:09:36 Post subject:

“▲ 樱桃红了谁家婆娑一院的樱桃红了仿佛一夜间龙王把太多的玛瑙送达我跟老伴儿徜徉而入迎出来的是多年相熟的主人家有说有笑早就废弃了寒暄不饮酒不吃茶我们直奔树下 ” 太馋人啦！一院的红，有说有笑而不寒暄，撇开茶酒，直奔树下～自然的美丽，畅快的幸福。好诗歌。学习啦。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-04-18 10:23:56 Post subject:

亲切生动有画面喜欢问好 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-04-18 11:32:23 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“▲ 樱桃红了
...

谢谢一无朋友！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-04-18 11:34:18 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

亲切生动有画面喜欢问好

谢谢诗人水弦！！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-04-20 10:03:56 Post subject: 我这里的网速不正常，留言时点击了几次，竟然重复发布留言。抱歉！

山城子 wrote:

一无 wrote:

“▲ 樱桃红了
...

谢谢一无朋友！！

我这里的网速不正常，当时留言时点击了几次，今天发现竟然重复发布留言。如果可以，请朋友把多余的留言删除吧。
抱歉！
_________________
名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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